I love this story! I sense fun times ahead. I’m so glad to see how they pulled off their first meeting. Acting it will make it so - totally spot on. I really hope you write more of your amazing story! And thanks so much for the great chapters already posted.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always feel slightly apprehensive when I get review alerts for WIPs I haven't updated in forever (which is, well, all of them at the moment) so a big bunch of positive and encouraging feedback is theraputic and very much appreciated :) I really do want to finish these, but unfortunately can't predict when my brain will be up to it. Hopefully not too far in the future! Thanks for reading and I'm very glad you enjoyed my work.
I love that Harry has his own room and bed, with a bedtime. That certainly feels legit. I hope Harry comes clean to Severus about his life on Privet Drive. Thanks for this wonderful chapter.
I like the realization at the end of the chapter. Thanks for your awesome story! I’m really enjoying it.
Great cooking and conversation between the two!
I hope Harry comes clean about his time with the Dursleys.
I love all the thought you put into this chapter, answering questions to fill any holes in their plan.
This is totally brilliant - the face of father and son they have to present to the world, even as they struggle to develop a better relationship in actuality. I’m looking forward to that journey!
Terrific start to your story! The premise is fun and unique, starting with the adoption instead of ending with it. I’m looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Harry and Snape develops.
Cute story, I always wondered why it was never continued.
Author's Response: Thanks! It will be continued, it's not abandoned; I just have a lot of projects going on and very poor concentration. Thanks for reading!
Cannot wait to read more as this is amazing! d84;d84;
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