Terrific start to your story! The premise is fun and unique, starting with the adoption instead of ending with it. I’m looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Harry and Snape develops.
Simply awesome! Love how Harry didn't get all childish and upset that Snape was trying to drag him off, he complied like an actual thinking human, unlike how a lot of other stories write him. Thanks so much for sharing!
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| 03 Feb 2016 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good start thank you
Nice first chapter. Who would have thought that Fudge would be sneaky enough to wait until the deadline was nearly up to notify Dumbledore of Harry's status? No wonder Snape was in a panic. And now that Harry has seen the adoption certificate, he is probably in a panic, too.
| Title: A Reluctant Rescue
| 16 Jan 2016 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: maha (Anonymous)
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I came looking for story to make me stop thinking about the sad news of Alan Rickman death which I still can't get over or believe ,, but I'm glad I found this story what a great start please do update soon ,please don't kill sirius as the story go 😢
Excellent opening, and lovely tribute. I look forward to reading more. You've dropped quite a few hints, and that has me curious.
| Title: A Reluctant Rescue
| 15 Jan 2016 9:17 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Excellent beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter.
A wonderful beginning! I am very excited for the rest of the story! RIP Alan Rickman.
A wonderful beginning! I am very excited for the rest of the story! RIP Alan Rickman.
| Title: A Reluctant Rescue
| 15 Jan 2016 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Good start. Snape's panic and haste was well described.
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