I love that Harry has his own room and bed, with a bedtime. That certainly feels legit. I hope Harry comes clean to Severus about his life on Privet Drive. Thanks for this wonderful chapter.
This has been a fun read so far! I hope harry opens up more to snape about his abuse from the dursleys. I like the way you described snape's house, and Harry's room sounds cool. It would be cool if he decorated it. I hope they go shopping soon and get harry some new clothes and stuff.
Yes, please continue as soon as possible and, please try to find a way to 'enlighten' Severus to Harry's actual life in Durskaban?
Thanks!
MelJ
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| 29 Mar 2016 9:40 pm
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I loved this chapter and your whole story. Your story is well written with an original angle. Great job so far. I would love to see some more tense moments as they somewhat get along. Maybe Harry misbehaving in Snape's class when school start back up or him getting himself into trouble during the summer. There could be lots of potential as he is not used to having anyone care for him and how to behave like a normal child. I also like your pace. Their relationship is going to take time and you are doing a great job at it. I'm excited for whatever comes next.
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| 29 Mar 2016 8:15 pm
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Very good chapter, I loved Sirius's reaction to the letter and the action plan! Thank you for updating.
I'm glad that Sirius didn't do anything crazy. I wouldn't have put it past him. Harry and Snape seem to be getting along fairly well so far. I wonder how long that will last?
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| 27 Mar 2016 1:10 am
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please update this is so good, can't wait to see fatherly snape.
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| 26 Mar 2016 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Glad to see a new installment-- fascinating story!
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| 26 Mar 2016 10:59 am
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| Reviewer: arya (Anonymous)
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moreeee severus and harry please. love this story, fresh idea & creative.
please update soon
Great chapter; I like how Sirius did not overreact to Harry's news, and that Remus was there as well. That Dumbledore mentioned Hermione's idea was excellent as well. I look forward to reading more.
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