| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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I really like this! Looking forward to more :)!
| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 10:52 am
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| Reviewer: Eryn (Anonymous)
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Loving this, great chapter, looking forward to the next update :)
Great setup. I particularly like Harry's thoughts about how they're going to pull this off, and how he realizes that both he and Snape are quite capable of acting the way that they need to. Looking forward to reading more.
Snape's rules for Harry made sense. He didn't ask for anything unreasonable and even let Harry keep his cloak. Harry seems willing to work with Severus so this may work. At least Harry will have a decent room, plenty to eat and the usual number of chores. (if any)
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 24 Jan 2016 12:28 am
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Enjoying this fic and looking forward to what comes next. I like that you're underplaying Harry's reactions just a tad-- he's not the capslock!Harry screaming in reaction to everything, but subdued and bewildered and weary, and Snape's little acknowledgment here that he has been unfair at considerable length with Harry was just the right degree of touching. Looking forward to more!
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 23 Jan 2016 10:50 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I like how Harry and Snape worked together to explain how things came about. My only complaint was the chapter was too short because I wanted MORE! Looking forward to the next update.
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 23 Jan 2016 9:44 pm
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| Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous)
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This is truly something different. Update soon!!!
La alegra que hayas actualizado. Me encanta esta historia, esperó ver pronto esa charla entre Severus y los Dursley. Ojalá sin Harry para no amortiguar el golpe.....
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 23 Jan 2016 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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So far, so good. Its surprising how well they can work together because they have to. Looking forward to seeing how it goes when they hit bumps in the road.
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 23 Jan 2016 5:37 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Love how the two are interacting.
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