Liked the variation in Ollivanders, and the Malfoys, especially Draco, are hilarious.
| Title: Wands
| 10 Feb 2016 12:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I really like your story, thank you!
Very cool chapter! Hope Sev gets more interaction alone with Petunia and Harry.
I really enjoyed the tour of Diagon Alley. I especially liked the boastful Lucius and Petunia's reaction to his self-importance. I can see how Lucius ended up on top - he goes all out to curry favor when he wants. Having a new wand for Severus was an interesting twist. I would have thought he would get a new one when he had the money. I suppose his mum's was adequate.
| Title: Wands
| 09 Feb 2016 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Wow, I like very much your story :)
It dafinitely has potential and is well written. Some moment are so funny.
And I like so OOC Lucius :)
Lovely start to this story! I look forward to the next chapter!
| Title: A Whole New World
| 04 Feb 2016 10:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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An excellent idea and story thank you so much
| Title: A Whole New World
| 01 Feb 2016 10:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Elle (Anonymous)
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I absolutely adore this. It's interesting how one thing has ended up changing so much. Poor Harry (and Petunia, for that matter). I love Draco's characterization so far, this is great.
| Title: A Whole New World
| 01 Feb 2016 4:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Thank you for a wonderful start. I always wish for a little more loving care in Harry's upbringing, it is nice to read about a reasonable Petunia.
Author's Response: Thanks
| Title: A Whole New World
| 01 Feb 2016 10:02 am
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| Reviewer: L (Anonymous)
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I'm looking forward to reading more! Awesome start!
Author's Response: Thank you
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