| Title: Unmasked
| 01 Mar 2016 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lot of selfish adults here! Thank you a great chapter
Oh gosh, my heart broke for Harry AND Snape, surprisingly. Lily really did mess that up pretty damn well, didn't she? I'm kind of disgusted with James for what he did to that poor child, and I'm surprised Severus didn't react more to THAT aspect either, as well as the fact that he kept Lily prisoner for basically the length of a year.
I like how Sev's first reaction is "ABORT ABORT" and running away. Very realistic for someone who's world has been shaken to it's core.
Poor Harry, oh (or Harriet, should I say!). There aren't words to say how bad I feel bad for her.
Author's Response: Well, Severus is still in denial so he refuses to accept what happened to Lily as fact as well right now :)
| Title: Unmasked
| 29 Feb 2016 10:06 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Great job again on this one. I think your story is both original and well written. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next between Snape and Harry.
If there was something I would say I don't like I would say that you skipped ahead in time quite a few times, but I understand that you have a timeline to your plot. I wish and hope though that we are able to slow down the pace a bit now and get Snape and Harry a chance to get to know each other, and I so look forward to what interactions you have planned. I think there is a lot of potential emotions and situations that could come up between them and I hope you take your time for a good amount of angst they need to work through and not make them best friends over night. I like the strict and stern potions master mixed with a bit a protectiveness as he makes sure she eats her veggies and drink her milk type of thing. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Some far everything that Petunia stated about her sister is true! I can understand Severus reaction to this news!! Great job!!
Aww poor Harry! Everyone's yelling, mad, and pointing wands at her.... A little bit goes out to Snape too for the surprise
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