| Title: A bottle of clouds
| 10 Mar 2016 11:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you a great chapter!
| Title: A bottle of clouds
| 09 Mar 2016 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy the quick updates. This chapter was great as your other ones have been. The part at the end was sweet when Snape held his hand out first, and I loved how Dudley blurted out about her not eating with them. Kids have a way of doing that. I'm looking forward to how they will deal with their newfound father-daugher relationship. Stern Snape and insecure Harry not being used to anyone giving her even the basic necessities. Could be a long road ahead.
| Title: A bottle of clouds
| 09 Mar 2016 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Gwyndolin (Anonymous)
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Interesting fanfiction; pleasant to read. Switching between Severus' and Harry's POV really helps to understand the emotional mindset of both characters. Your update speed is also quite high which makes the story even more enjoyable.
I'm both sad and... 'entertained' how Severus only gradually realizes the magnitude of Harry's abuse. Partially it's his own fault since he really wants to hate Harry for her father misdeeds, so he is reluctant with abandoning his opinions about Harry. I doubt he will be able to discover all the abuse without Harry's help. And with how scared and wary Harry is of Severus I don't see her opening up any time soon... but I do hope I'm wrong.
It was very satisfying to see Severus punching Vernon. Serves him right. It's sad that Harry misinterprets Severus' intentions but with how Severus has treated her so far it is a quite understandable reaction.
Maybe sharing her dream with Severus will help to close the gap between them. After all, Severus hates James and now Harry has a reason to be disgusted by her 'father' as well for how he trated her mother.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this fanfiction and your hard work.
God, I can't wait for all the father/daughter feels.
| Title: A bottle of clouds
| 08 Mar 2016 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Lyza (Anonymous)
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I did not know how I would feel about this fic, but I have grown to really enjoy it!
I really like how well the title reflects the chapter, and how you managed to sneak in a glimpse of what happened in Harry's past. Cant wait for the next chapter~!
Finally severus know how harry was treated by her relatives! Looking forward to seeing the aftermath of finding harry and severus are father and daughter!
At last he's figured stuff out!
Can't wait to read more!
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