| Title: Ruby and emerald
| 14 Mar 2016 8:07 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Oh, wow, great chapter again! I loved Snape's reaction to the news. It was, although emotional, spot on. The comments about James in his his grave...brilliant. I'm glad he decided to come back.
The green dress Petunia outfit made me smirk. It was about the same caliber as Snape pacing her flower beds. Excellent work!
MOOORRREEE! lol i love it cant wait for more.
| Title: Ruby and emerald
| 14 Mar 2016 1:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Gwyndolin (Anonymous)
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Nice Chapter. Very emotional for the most part but quite funny at the end. The green-red colour play was clever, especially since the the colour of Gryffindor is red.
I liked how both Severus and Harry are dealing with the revelation. Both are naturally upset but they also feel some kind of "mirth" (hard to call it that just yet) which confuses them greatly. It's apparent in Harry being upset about Sev leaving for example. Or in Sev feeling hurt when seeing her cry and questioning himself if he even is suited to raise a child.
That being said, I didn't expect them to already make some progress. Small as it is, it could be far worse. I'm also not quite sure what to make of Petunia. She certainly didn't treat Harry very well over the past years but she doesn't appear that horrid. As it is right now I enjoy her little spats with Sev. Also wondering how she got Harry to even wear those clothes, and what her motives were anyway.
I also liked the short mention of Hermione and Ron, and how they would react to Harry's situation; was very sweet. I have no doubt that they will stick with her regardless of her parenthood.
Good chapter; looking forward to the next one. Thank you.
| Title: Ruby and emerald
| 13 Mar 2016 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very emotional chapter thank you
I was between wanting to hit Severus for enjoying Harry's obviously mortification about the dress and wanting to laugh when he almost choked about the fact that Harry was almost in Slytherin.
HA-- the bit about Harry setting the Hat on fire was great. Very Slytherin!
Love Seveus's comment that she could be a Slytherin, with the color she is wearing!
I like how Harry said she threatened to burn the hat... Very Slytherin
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