Headmaster D drop the ball on checking on Harry! I wish Prof. McG had some control over the situation to overrule H. D. Onward to see what next...
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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ARG = Severus. I have no words to describe how that happened. XD
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 9:34 pm
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My gosh, who the heck does Dumbledore think he is? He can't tell Severus what to do, especially over his own biological child! I'm seriously waiting for someone to, in the very least, verbally slap some sense into the old fool. XD I know ARG is overwhelmed by the news, but I hope he gets his backbone a little stronger and tell Dumbledore to shove off. Hahaha. Great writing and storytelling, btw. Thankies!
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Wow, you are just posting too quick lol. You had 2 chapters posted in no time. I love it!
This had me feeling more disbelief and hatred towards Dumbledore when he locked them out of the wards...poor Harry. The letter from Lily and the information revealed was a great addition. It gave just a little extra emotion and incentive for Snape. I love your story. Great job!
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 20 Mar 2016 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh how I hate Dumbledore! Thank you a wonderful chapter but how will Harry feel when no one comes back? She will lose trust in them!
I really hope Harry doesn't forgive Dumbledore for this, because that is just twisted
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