| Title: Who I am not
| 11 Apr 2016 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very entertaining chapter, they are very alike!
| Title: Who I am not
| 31 Mar 2016 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter as so expressive, loved their confrontations as I felt sorry for both of them!
| Title: Who I am not
| 30 Mar 2016 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Yay, I was so happy to see another update. Another enjoyable chapter. I think I liked the second half of it the best. There wasn't really anything wrong with the first half, the second just seemed to flow a little better..maybe the writing seemed a little strained in the beginning. I loved the Snape-Harry interactions and I can't believe she got off that easily after swearing in Snape's face. I can't wait to see her move in. I bet it will be a hard secret for to keep from her friends.
I love how Snape is gradually getting over the initial potter angst and getting into the concerned father role
Oh god, this poor girl. Her life is being torn to pieces and she can't do anything about it!
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