| Title: Kitty's Creek
| 28 Apr 2016 6:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter, I like the fact that Severus is almost in character in his dealings with Harry
an interesting shopping experience for harriet and severus!!
| Title: Kitty's Creek
| 21 Apr 2016 8:39 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Excellent chapter from start to finish. I can't think of anything that I did not like about it. You had me captivated though the whole chapter. I really, really like that you do not make things okay right away and that you work through some of the feelings and tension. Their characters are perfectly written. I like that Harry is still, and has feelings and reasoning skills like a child. She is definitely going to be in a world of trouble. Excited for the next chapter.
Such a tense yet sentimental relationship love it
If I had just drone that my poarenrs would have hauled me over their knee in the street.
This was just lovely, as always.
Someone's in trouble! I really love how sassy Harry is. There's a Slytherin-ness in her that reminds me of Severus. If he would only stop being so closed off, he'd see that his child is more like him than he thinks.
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