| Title: Watching and learning
| 06 Jun 2016 7:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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| Title: Watching and learning
| 05 Jun 2016 8:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter I loved Severus in this way totally confused and only just in control very clever, thank you
I love Flitwick. I have yet to ever see him not take a student under his wing. Maybe he could have some more interaction with Victoria? Someone to talk to that she wouldn't stress over getting in trouble with. And maybe he could help with her little writing issue (I bet he's already thinking up solutions for her). A little socializing without Snape breathing down her neck might be something she needs. Minerva's fine, great and all, but she really needs a friend, a confidant, at this point, not another disciplinarian. Not another person that has expectations, just someone to listen for when she's ready to talk. And I mean actually -listen- when she finally decides to. Someone to work -with- her, not 'what's best' for her. (Yes, in the end, I think what she really needs at this point is a hug.)
| Title: Watching and learning
| 03 Jun 2016 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh! This is so great and it just keeps getting better. What can I say but awesome job...from start to finish an excellent chapter. One of my favorite things about this was Flitwick. I never would have thought I'd like his character, but the little part he had you wrote very well. You almost made me think of him as a grandfather type and the line Mind your father was the best ever.
I'd love for them to have Flitwick as an ally in their endeavor. He seems a bit more rational than Minerva and Severus can be. I hope to see him not as a main character but more as little side note here and there.
I also love all the emotions. Keep up the great work. I am so excited for the next chapter.
Maybe now you'll start to come to your senses and adopt her.
| Title: Watching and learning
| 01 Jun 2016 4:55 pm
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| Reviewer: kyralian (Anonymous)
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Hi, I found this story a few weeks ago and have enjoyed it a great deal. My favourite girl Harry story. I love how confused fatherhood makes Snape. I'm surprised Victoria doesn't ever refer to herself by her new name, I'd think she'd be more excited. I can't wait for Snape to slip up and call her Victoria to her face.
AW this was such a great chapter! Loved everything about it! I hope Severus opens up to Harry (or should I say Victoria) about Lily! I would LOVE to hear THAT conversation!
| Title: Watching and learning
| 01 Jun 2016 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Aww, fantastic chapter! I loved it! Clever Flitwick! I wonder if anyone else is going to figure it out. I loved the emotions and descriptions in this chapter. I bet Severus would forbid his daughter to take Divination, given how he feels towards the teacher. I wonder if Lily and Severus took Divination.
I'm loving this story. Thanks for the update! Please update when you can! I can't wait to see how Slytherin house will treat Miss Evans.
Good ole Flitwick knows what's up
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