| Title: Storms on the horizon
| 12 Sep 2016 7:09 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
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I was surprised to see this update. I must have somehow missed it and didn't catch it until I read your other story. Sorry for not being able to review the previous few chapters. I read them when they were posted but have not been feeling well so this will be a joint review. You do a great job as always and I have enjoyed the updates.
I was a bit disappointed in Victoria 2 chapters back when she choose to sneak out, go to the headmaster and then lie to Snape about it. I thought she was pretty rude and wouldn't be too undeserving of a smack or 2 to the backside. Then I was so happy when they somewhat reconciled in the next chapter. It was so sweet. This chapter was great too. I am almost hoping that she will get a glimpse at what a real family is and how they treat and respect each other and come back a little apologetic to Snape regarding her previous behavior. Great job!
Severus may have thought it obvious, but there is just so much of a communication gap between the two of them that his 'present' of visiting her friend's family was lost in the void. Still, a card or a note even would have been welcome. At least otherwise, she's having fun at the Grangers.
| Title: Storms on the horizon
| 10 Sep 2016 2:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm so sorry to hear you are ill. I hope you get better soon.
Loved the chapter and Harry getting a normal birthday for once. Please kick Severus into doing something for her soon.
hope harriet has that birthday wish!!
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