What an ending- so victoria ended in syntherin house! looking forward see how this played out!! great scene in the common room, & private with severus & victoria!! Wonderful job!!
What an ending- so victoria ended in syntherin house! looking forward see how this played out!! great scene in the common room, & private with severus & victoria!! Wonderful job!!
| Title: Resorting To Resorting
| 06 Jun 2017 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very intense chapter thank you.
I wonder if you could follow the usual idea and change line when the speaker changes as this helps with the flow of your story. Thank you for your creative story
Author's Response: I can I just don't do it while I actually write it - just writingout a block. Then i make sections just before posting and i guess i wanted these out quickly ^_^
Keep fighting Victoria!!!! Don't let them think they win!!!! GO GO GRYFFINDORE!!!!
| Title: Resorting To Resorting
| 02 Jun 2017 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
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So nice to see another chapter! I'm glad that Victoria got sorted into slytherin. Hopefully it will create some opportunity for her to (reluctantly) get closer to her father.
You had the emotions spot on in this chapter-the pre-teen Victoria and surly, yet trying to be patient Severus. Your characters are just so great, and the development is realistic. Love the whole story.--oh and I really liked that you briefly mentioned Madam Pomfrey. It tied in well with the beginning of the story and the whole situation Victoria found herself in.
| Title: Resorting To Resorting
| 02 Jun 2017 2:00 am
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| Reviewer: Miranda (Signed)
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