| Title: Who I am not
| 30 Mar 2016 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Yay, I was so happy to see another update. Another enjoyable chapter. I think I liked the second half of it the best. There wasn't really anything wrong with the first half, the second just seemed to flow a little better..maybe the writing seemed a little strained in the beginning. I loved the Snape-Harry interactions and I can't believe she got off that easily after swearing in Snape's face. I can't wait to see her move in. I bet it will be a hard secret for to keep from her friends.
I love how Snape is gradually getting over the initial potter angst and getting into the concerned father role
Oh god, this poor girl. Her life is being torn to pieces and she can't do anything about it!
| Title: I will
| 26 Mar 2016 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very enjoyable chapter
the plan to move harriet in severus's house like a good idea.. harriet will be totally upset of new arrangement!! like severus's response to headmaster concerning that james using the spell.. hogwart will explode when they are introduced to harriet!!
| Title: I will
| 25 Mar 2016 11:46 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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wow, dumbledore really is a monster. he does seem to care more for control than anybody´s well-being.
| Title: I will
| 24 Mar 2016 9:06 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Every line I kept reading of this chapter I kept thinking "please don't be the end of the chapter, please don't be the end of the chapter.." I loved it! Great job!
I thought I commented on your previous chapter as well but or some reason it didn't show up. In any case, I feel the same as wrote then. I'm not sure that I trust Dumbledore. He seems to have something up his sleeve still. I don't believe he will just let her go even if they find a "suitable" place. Harry was brilliant with Dumbledore though.
I can't wait for the new chapter to see how it will go with Snape. I'm hoping for some great feeling with tension and emotions when they interact in private. So excited!
Oh poor Harry! Imagine finding out the man you thought was your father did something rather unforgivable, and the man who IS your father hates you...
I can only imagine all the shenanigans and feels Harry being moved to Snape's quarters will bring. Will they begin to call her Harriet again? I'm fearful for what being moved to Slytherin AND being revealed to be a girl will do to her... they're bound to be unkind an prey on the fact that everyone thought she was a boy for so long...
love the scene with poppy and prof. mcg, severus, h.d and harry!!
Headmaster D drop the ball on checking on Harry! I wish Prof. McG had some control over the situation to overrule H. D. Onward to see what next...
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