| Title: Night clouds
| 21 Mar 2016 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I'm amazed at how you are producing such a wonderful story so quickly!
Author's Response: It's easy to write when I have something else I SHOULD be doing! ;)
| Title: Night clouds
| 21 Mar 2016 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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HAHAHA, she actually shoved him. Bless you, dear child.
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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ARG = Severus. I have no words to describe how that happened. XD
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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My gosh, who the heck does Dumbledore think he is? He can't tell Severus what to do, especially over his own biological child! I'm seriously waiting for someone to, in the very least, verbally slap some sense into the old fool. XD I know ARG is overwhelmed by the news, but I hope he gets his backbone a little stronger and tell Dumbledore to shove off. Hahaha. Great writing and storytelling, btw. Thankies!
| Title: Night clouds
| 21 Mar 2016 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Great updates!! Can't wait to see what's next!
I can feel Sev desperately trying not to like her and yet it's not working. Harry is SO sassy and snarky just like him I love it.
She SHOVED Dumbledore I'm crying
| Title: Chesspieces and puzzlepieces
| 21 Mar 2016 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Wow, you are just posting too quick lol. You had 2 chapters posted in no time. I love it!
This had me feeling more disbelief and hatred towards Dumbledore when he locked them out of the wards...poor Harry. The letter from Lily and the information revealed was a great addition. It gave just a little extra emotion and incentive for Snape. I love your story. Great job!
Love it! Dumbledore can be such a jerk.
| Title: Night clouds
| 21 Mar 2016 3:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Gwyndolin (Anonymous)
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Great chapter. After the last one I was wondering if Harry would be disappointed when Severus wouldn't visit her even though it was McG who made that promise. Turns out she was. Her struggle to trust Severus and questioning his true motives is really saddening but understandable. Well, she will figure it out at some point; it just takes time.
Good thing that the cupboard was locked by magic. I have no doubt that the Dursleys are already fuming at fact that they can't throw her stuff out.
I'm actually suprised that Dumbledore gave in. I feared he would try to sow distrust between Harry and Sev, McG, and Poppy, so that she would be more vulnerable to his manipulations, especially after he put up wards to prevent them from entering her house. Still, I don't trust him. Him insisting on her staying at the Dursleys is very reminiscent of how James had locked Lily away; and he is also arguing in both cases (well in Lily's case it is rather about withholding the letters) that he had their best interests in mind... He's hurt not only Lily and Harry but also Severus gravely with his actions.
Very amusing ending. Now all Harry needs to learn is how to sneer like Sev and the picture is perfect.
I'm looking forward to the next school term. So far it shapes out to be interesting. Good work.
I liked the scheming between the two and how Harry was still daring to push the headmaster
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