Title: A girl named Harry
| 15 Mar 2016 9:50 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good especially Dumbledore! Greater good prevails! Thank you a great chapter.
Title: A girl named Harry
| 15 Mar 2016 9:41 pm
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Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Could I say that I loved and hated that at the same time? Great chapter, and I didn't really hate it...just Dumbledore's actions. You really did well expounding on the less desirable attributes of his character and it pulled on my emotions for sure. Suggesting she stay a boy? What were you thinking Dumbledore? I hope someone stands up to him. I would love for Harry to go live with Snape and I think there would be plenty of of angst involved with that.....and I love the way she looks now. Either way you manage to get the feelings going for sure. Excellent work! I really liked that you are letting the other adults see some of the abuse she has gone through too even if the may not be aware of it all. Excited for the next chapter.
Title: A girl named Harry
| 15 Mar 2016 11:50 am
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Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous)
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heehee this is so good im eally enjoying your fic you have a nack to your writing .
Gryffindor she may be in name, but Slytherin she is in many an action. That's how she survived with the Dursleys for so long, is it not? Keep up the good work, Dark
The SASS from Harry is A++++
Uh, is Dumbledore okay? Does he not realize the identity issues this poor girl will go through if he makes her go back to being a boy? God, I hope she goes to live with Snape.
Happy that Harry decided to be girl! I wouldn't trust Headmaster D by a long shot, he probably had a scheme up his sleeve... Hope Prof. McG and Severus will keep a close eye the headmaster.. Like Pentunia's suggestion, it might work...
Ambiguous feelings toward dumbledore, so I'm excited
Title: Ruby and emerald
| 14 Mar 2016 8:07 pm
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Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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Oh, wow, great chapter again! I loved Snape's reaction to the news. It was, although emotional, spot on. The comments about James in his his grave...brilliant. I'm glad he decided to come back. The green dress Petunia outfit made me smirk. It was about the same caliber as Snape pacing her flower beds. Excellent work!
MOOORRREEE! lol i love it cant wait for more.
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