I really like how well the title reflects the chapter, and how you managed to sneak in a glimpse of what happened in Harry's past. Cant wait for the next chapter~!
Finally severus know how harry was treated by her relatives! Looking forward to seeing the aftermath of finding harry and severus are father and daughter!
At last he's figured stuff out!
Can't wait to read more!
| Title: It comes in the darkness
| 07 Mar 2016 9:08 pm
|
| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Just loved this chapter too. My favorite part was when he sent Harry up to bed. That line "go up to your room and go to bed" was just so sweet and emotional. I love that he is starting to question Harry's living situation a bit, but still stays in character. Just because it isn't ideal he's not going to be doting on her.
I am curious and excited as to where you will take this next. You've done an excellent job so far.
| Title: It comes in the darkness
| 06 Mar 2016 9:34 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Thank you a very moving chapter mainly because of what was not said.
Like that Severus has been thinking about this situation and that it's a possibly he is Harry's father!
Sigh. Oh, Severus. I like how you have him slowly working through the reality of the situation, however painful it is to read. This story really is just lovely.
| Title: It comes in the darkness
| 06 Mar 2016 5:32 pm
|
| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I love this story and hope you keep updating it so regularly!! I just love your creativity with the hidden girl aspect. Keep up the great work!
| Title: It comes in the darkness
| 06 Mar 2016 2:02 am
|
| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Finally Snape gets smart about Harry. Good chapter.
I like how Snape has to fight with himself when it comes to Harry. And how Severus finally had that emotional breakdown at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter
|