| Title: Not our mess!
| 29 Feb 2016 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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I meant to review this chapter earlier before the other one was out but I didn't get around to. This chapter was excellent. I think it is my favorite so far. It was well written, it flowed beautifully, and just the perfect amount of angst/emotion/suspense to keep me at the edge of my seat....And wow, I got a surprise there at the end. I guess I overlooked the fact that Snape was her biological father. Great job and I love the quick updates.
Some far everything that Petunia stated about her sister is true! I can understand Severus reaction to this news!! Great job!!
Aww poor Harry! Everyone's yelling, mad, and pointing wands at her.... A little bit goes out to Snape too for the surprise
| Title: Not our mess!
| 28 Feb 2016 10:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter especially the hydrangea bush! Thank you
| Title: Not our mess!
| 28 Feb 2016 7:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader5439 (Anonymous)
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Thanks for the update! I was not expecting that! Wow! At first I had imagined that Harry is transgender at had at some point tried to express her gender dismorphia. But now I'm considering an intersex condition? I'm so excited to keep reading.
Author's Response: As an agender person myself, I find that an interesting angle however it's nothing so complex.
Oh my god. Oh god that was brilliant. Really. This chapter was just brilliantly done.
I laughed SO hard at Snape and the bush.
OH NEXT chAPteR oH SNAPE WHAT DID YOU DO
Well that was shocking news to hear from harry's aunt! Why the cliffie at end? Looking forward to see more soon!
Author's Response: Considering how long the chapter would need to be for me to fit it all there I thought it best to end it there or you'd have to wait longer for the update ^_^
Oh my lord! So much drama, with the perfect amount of Snape humor! Loved it
| Title: The wind begins to blow...
| 26 Feb 2016 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you great writing and a great story!
| Title: Sisters and brothers
| 26 Feb 2016 5:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love your Hermione and Ron they are very IC
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