| Title: Sisters and brothers
| 24 Feb 2016 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous)
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hee this is so good i really am enjoying this i cant ait to see who finds out i bet its snape or malfoy.
Yes!! The mystery continues with the mirror or Erised and A Snape like daughter!
| Title: Sisters and brothers
| 24 Feb 2016 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Oh, that scene with Harry looking in the mirror hurt my heart. From the looks of it, looks glamours of some kind, and that she looks a bit like Snape! :D
OOOH, next chapter sounds like it's gonna be good! Though I do wonder, how does Dumbledore not know? Or maybe he does, and he's simply being Dumbledore. Hm.
Author's Response: 'Simply being Dumbledore' - this had me laughing so hard :'D
Great story I can't wait for more
| Title: Certainty
| 22 Feb 2016 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. It's well written, original and quite exciting. The quick updates are nice too. You've done an excellent job on Harry's character and Hermione's as well. The interaction between the two of them was sweet.
The only thing I find a little odd is that Dumbledore and Hogwarts in particular do not know that Harry is a girl. If she was able to get up the stairs then it seems like her stuff should have been placed in the girls dorm and her letter should have said Miss Potter.
I would love to see som more Harry and Snape interaction in the future chapters, but I would also love for it to develop naturally. The story has a nice pace to it and as your characters develop I hope they will start to grow closer. I was almost expecting the cp warning to be related to Harry and that Snape was going to pull her by the ear and not Draco. (not sure if that even needed a cp warning in my opinion...he was asking for it).
Can't wait to see when/if it will be discovered that she is a girl. I'm excited for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your time and talent.
So Harry is really a girl! Wonder what he did now, he has that knowledge? Hope the troll is located, before someone is hurt!
Harry finally told someone his secret! Onward to read what next....
I'd been wondering if Harry was literally a girl or if that was just something Petunia had done to mess with her. Guess this chapter answered that! Can't wait to see more!
Oh my god, I love it. I can't wait for Sev to find out, and by the looks of those flashbacks, it seems like someone may be a dad ;) I'm so excited to see this mystery unfold!
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