Hi,
I'm quite enjoying your story so far. As Twinheart said, I think there's something wrong with chapter 4. Also, wasn't Harry injured? Did I miss the part where he got healed? Please keep writing!
Interesting beginning- you might want to re-check all of your chapters, though. I don't know if there is a problem with your uploading, or auto-edit, but many paragraphs have incomplete sentences, missing words, etc. It was a bit difficult to follow in some places. I look forward to reading a corrected version.
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