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Reviews For Twisted Oak Place
Title: Chapter 8 19 Apr 2016 6:07 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ummm.... I don't know what to say. You had an ok story going, and then ended it like this???? Did you forget where you wanted to the end the story??? The previous 7 chapters were the start of a decent story. This just felt rushed.

    How about a description of how they got out of the cell. How did Snape and Harry end up working together? How did they get over their animosity? Why did they never tell their friends they were alive? How did they actually win the war? Were there Horcruxes?

    Just some ideas.....

    Author's Response: Thank you for your ideas.The ending was rushed and as a result cruel since it gave no answers.There is a good chance it will be rewritten at some point.

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