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Reviews For The Unwanted One
Author's Response: Thanks. I edited the chapter so that it was more clear it was Harry who was having the nightmare. What mix up of tenses are you referring to?
One more thing if you want your story last longer tried not to make Snape changes his mind about Harry To soon it s more realistic because who can erase years of hatred in one sommer. And as Snqpe is a very obtuse it s understable that it ont change his mind before a long time maybe. But it is your story so do what you think would fit the story. I m no one to force you To change your mind. Forget what i said And keep going you are the best :) Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yes I agree that it's difficult to get rid of hatred in one summer, but I think the fact that Snape knows Harry is his son, his and Lily's, will get him to change his mind a bit quicker than if they had no relationship other than student and professor. Thanks for the review! I promise next chapter is coming soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad your enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is coming soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Next chapter coming really soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It just takes me longer to upload on here.
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