Oh my goodness, this is so darn good
| Title: On the Edge
| 09 Apr 2016 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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omg I love the storyy and a great cliffie you've got there! hope you'll be updating soon!:)
| Title: On the Edge
| 05 Apr 2016 8:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very well thought out chapter and another cliffie
Oh, that's lovely. At least when he finally succumbed to his injuries, Severus was on hand instead of Harry being alone... or worse, with his 'little brother' of more likely to kick him in the cracked ribs and laugh than get help. More'n likely the brat did something during their little 'wrestling match' anyway. Oh, Severus is going to get a wake-up call when he sees what was under those glamours.
Author's Response: I couldn't make Harry suffer anymore by himself or in Kieran's company, it would have been too cruel of me. Severus is definitely going to be shocked to say the least. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: On the Edge
| 03 Apr 2016 1:58 am
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Ahh! What's going to happen next!? :)
Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough! :)
| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 4:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! There's definitely more on the way!
| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 11:21 am
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| Reviewer: Trish (Anonymous)
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Great
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 10:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Really love this one. And a great cliffhanger too. Hope the next chapter isn't too long - can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next one is coming soon I promise!
Woah! What a cliffhanger! Great chapter! I am greatly enjoying Kieran as a foil to Harry. I see more issues and problems between the two in the future. I am loving your Snape. Great thoughts in this chapter from both Snape and Harry. It makes sense that Harry would get so upset about his mum. Great story and thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! There's definitely going to be conflict between the two that Snape's going to have to deal with. Thanks for reviewing! :)
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