This is amazing, so emotional and poignant.
This was really good. Please update soon. I can't wait to know what Kieran's punishment is. I'm happy that Severus knows the truth now.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Update is coming really soon.
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| 18 Apr 2016 10:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written and thought out thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
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| 16 Apr 2016 3:59 pm
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying your story line! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I think at this point, doing whatever he can to erase their past and starting over with open eyes may be a good place to start. True, there are things that both have said and done that can't be taken back, but more than just physical injuries can be healed now. I don't often recommend it, but I do believe some retail therapy is needed... or at least something that isn't Dudley's castoffs. And maybe... letting Harry pick and decorate his own room. Letting him make decisions that he's never been allowed or even asked before. I think he'll stay in the room he's been given (for now), but at least he would have a choice. The other boy, on the other hand, I see a lot of backsliding on fragile relationships if he isn't reigned in and soon. It's heartless, but I think it would be better for him to be sent back to his mother for a week... or the rest of the summer! That kid, he's the type to be given an inch and go a mile. Any equality between him and Harry, even the slightest hint that the boy's not the center of the universe, and I can see him taking it as an assault on his personage. Then again, if the kid is punished (as he rightly should!), it'll upset Harry. He's never seen others punished for his sake before, he's never been the one championed, always the champion. If the kid is punished, I can see ways of Harry 'helping' by pretty much volunteering to take the punishment in the kid's place. It'll be a frustrating thing, trying to get Harry to do anything 'fun' or 'for himself'. He doesn't think he deserves it. Flying may be Harry's greatest joy, but if he even thinks that it's taking away from the kid, he'll refuse on principle alone.
I hope he gives Harry a better room soon.
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| 14 Apr 2016 1:34 pm
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| Reviewer: 👍 (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Unmasked Truth
| 13 Apr 2016 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Glad to see Severus open his eyes finally and actually see the boy before him. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing your story!
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| 13 Apr 2016 12:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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I'm so glad that Severus finally knows about Harry's past and I'm glad he didn't tell Kieran. Now...how to get Kieran and Harry to get along...
Great chapter. Thanks for updating.
Nice job with this chapter
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