Another amazing chapter. Your story is superb. I’m left feeling anxious by the events at the end of the chapter.
| Title: The Little Things
| 15 May 2016 9:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great ending thank you so much for updating
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Absolutely loved this chapter. :D I so can't wait to see what will happen next. :D I love the relationship that is developing between Severus and Harry. Update as soon as you can. {sorry for the late review, I seem to not be able to get an alert when you update.}
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Welp, that's the last we see of Clarice in even a remotely positive light. Now we know where the boy got his opinion from. At least the boy was distracted by his mother the majority of the trip, so that Severus could take care of Harry (as much as Harry would allow). Oh, I hope that he used those spy skills and bought the book that Harry was looking through. It's the first bit of actual independant personality/opinion that he's actually shown. Ah, I know what it feels like, being pushed to the back of the group like that. It may not be intentional (on Severus' part, at least), but things like that happen. Still, at trip to London? Even if it's just a Harry-Severus thing, it could be a lot of teeth-pulling at this point, trying to get Harry to surrender an actual opinion. Like the clothing: not a single peep out of him. Heck, there could be a hot pink t-shirt with the words 'Snakes are where it's at' in glitter and Harry would say nothing about it. Sure, the thing might not ever leave the bottom of his drawer, but Harry wouldn't say anything about it. I just hope that Severus is able to find/save Harry before the Polyjuice wears off... Or, maybe, the simplest disguises are the best...? *hopeful cringe*
Author's Response: Well it's basically due to Harry being used to getting little and is just grateful for anything really. He doesn't want to be of any trouble. I think once he gets around the idea that he isn't a burden, he'll open up more. It's a slow process that Severus will have to work through. If they were going to take a trip to London, it will be a while before they do. Hmm you'll have to wait and see if Severus gets to Harry in time.
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
| Title: The Little Things
| 12 May 2016 12:59 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Awesome cliffhanger!!! And a lovely, detailed chapter throughout! (I loved the owl biting Kieran--he totally deserved it!!! :D ) Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I had to the put that owl bit in there lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! :)
| Title: The Little Things
| 12 May 2016 8:06 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Again a fantastic chapter :)! Thank you for the update, can ' t wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Oh my gosh!! Ahhh!! I did not see that coming! I wonder where Harry went, did a Deatheater get him? Did Draco make him out earlier?! Oh man, I really hope that Harry is safe and still in disguise! I really hope that he can get out of there safely!
I found it really amusing that Kieran is all the qualities Severus thought Harry was before he got to know Harry for real. The Quidditch book was just the icing on the cake.
I'm glad that Severus told Clarice off - he didn't like her any way, but they way she seemed to hate Harry with no provocation... I wonder why that is. Is it because Harry is Lily's child and Clarice is jealous of Lily's standing in Snape's heart? Or is she a Death Eater or something?
Funny that both of Kieran's parents are potions masters. He should be a natural at it then, right?
I have a feeling that this next year at Hogwarts is going to be an eventful and dramatic one. I kind of hope that Kieran doesn't get into Slytherin. Obviously he won't be getting into Ravenclaw.
Oh I really hope that Harry is okay so that he makes it to Hogwarts afterall! Thank you so much for the update, fantastic chapter! Please update when you can!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! You'll find out soon why Clarice hates Harry. Severus definitely got an eye opener to the personalities of his sons. The next year at Hogwarts is going to be a wild ride. Lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
| Title: The Little Things
| 12 May 2016 4:50 am
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| Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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Ohh! I hate that woman, judging people before knowing about anything.
Grr, I hope she is punished, but with harry kind nature he will probably forgive her quite quickly.
Please i want to see what happened next :)
Author's Response: Haha you're not the only one.
Thanks for reviewing! :)
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