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Title: A Test of Strength 02 Feb 2022 11:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What an action packed chapter. I wonder what the unknown curse was and why he didn’t throw an avada instead (though maybe he’s still hoping to discover the prophecy in Harry’s mind)? I loved Snape’s conviction towards Harry at the end.
Title: A Test of Strength 05 Jun 2016 6:36 pm
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, whatever that spell is, it's purely physical. Or at least complicated enough that a general scan can't pick it up. Snape stating that Harry is his son to someone not in the family? Good, very good thing. A sign of progress, that.
    Welp, at least the boy and his mother are still as anonymous as ever, thus not a target.
    When Harry wakes up (He WILL wake up!), I can possibly see some scared/relieved yelling of 'NEVER do something as STUPID and RECKLESS AGAIN!' He just can't catch a break, can he? Not even in the summertime. I just hope that he wakes up and is healed soon. But knowing Tom as we all do, that was no simple spell. I've learned that purple is never good when it comes to spells. For some reason, they're always the nastiest ones.
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 10:20 pm
Reviewer: 👍 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pls update asap i live for this
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter very tense and a good ending
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nicely written:) hope the next chapter will be out soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, the next chapter is coming soon. :)
Title: A Test of Strength 01 Jun 2016 10:33 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry!!!! Please be okay!!!! 😢😥😦😧😨😩😰😟😱😲😵😷😞😭😖😔😓😫🙇🙏😿🙀💚💔

    Author's Response: Haha we'll see... :)
Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! I am so worried about that unknown spell that went to Harry. Maybe they can use a pensive to hear the Latin Voldemort used to figure out what it was. I love how protective Snape is towards Harry now. I bet Kieran and his mother are going to have a huge case of jealousy over Snape's care for Harry.

    I love how the Twins protected their shop and Harry came to the rescue. I wonder what Voldemort was doing there, if it was just a coincidence or if Voldemort was looking for Harry or Severus.

    Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update! I am loving this story and am so happy when there is a new chapter to read. Thanks for sharing your story! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

    I was a little worried about the action scenes not being good enough, but I'm happy with how they turned out. It wouldn't be Harry if he didn't always come to the rescue.

    We'll have to wait and see what happens next with that spell! Plus Kieran and his mother are going to be back next chapter. Severus is going to have his hands full. Lol.

    Thanks for reviewing! :)

Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 6:53 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely written battle scene.

    Author's Response: Thanks you! :)
Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I wasn't expecting that.
Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely action scene with a beautiful cliffie ending

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it! :)

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