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Reviews For The Unwanted One
Welp, at least the boy and his mother are still as anonymous as ever, thus not a target. When Harry wakes up (He WILL wake up!), I can possibly see some scared/relieved yelling of 'NEVER do something as STUPID and RECKLESS AGAIN!' He just can't catch a break, can he? Not even in the summertime. I just hope that he wakes up and is healed soon. But knowing Tom as we all do, that was no simple spell. I've learned that purple is never good when it comes to spells. For some reason, they're always the nastiest ones.
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I love how the Twins protected their shop and Harry came to the rescue. I wonder what Voldemort was doing there, if it was just a coincidence or if Voldemort was looking for Harry or Severus. Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update! I am loving this story and am so happy when there is a new chapter to read. Thanks for sharing your story! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I was a little worried about the action scenes not being good enough, but I'm happy with how they turned out. It wouldn't be Harry if he didn't always come to the rescue. We'll have to wait and see what happens next with that spell! Plus Kieran and his mother are going to be back next chapter. Severus is going to have his hands full. Lol. Thanks for reviewing! :)
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