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Reviews For The Unwanted One
Author's Response: I've been working on it! Hopefully I'll finish and post it soon! :)
Pero sin duda estoy muriendo de ganas por ver a severus en los recuerdos que la dejó Lily. Espero que puedas publicar y actualizar pronto Author's Response: Don't worry, Severus will look at the memories eventually. He's been kinda busy lately. I'm working on the next chapter, though I'm not sure when it will be ready to post. Thanks for reviewing! :)
This was definitely a waking up chapter. Severus was getting the clue that Harry's home life wasn't all roses, but going into his mind and seeing even a portion of the physical effects, that really woke him up to the reality that his abuse was -a common occurrence- and something he was honestly used to and almost came to expect, in one form or another, from every adult that he came into contact with. (And the few that don't, confuse and scare the shit out of him, but he treats them like gold. (The Weasleys (sans Percy) and Hagrid Primarily.)) About halfway through the dreams, I had a thought and I started praying that they stopped before Harry got to school-age abuses. I don't think his body could have delt with a second round of Basilisk venom. Even pseudo-venom. Even as painful as it was, I'm glad that Severus was able to pull Harry out when he did. And, with seeing what his past was like 'first-hand', I suggest some positive-reinforcement touch therapy from now on. Because, really, very few people have ever touched him without the intent to harm. (I imagine that is why Hermione tackle-hugs Harry every chance she gets. Because she doesn't do it to Ron, I've noticed.) Author's Response: Ya know, I wondered what would happen if the curse progressed that far when I was writing the chapter, but decided to cut it off before the memories of Hogwarts. The curse would have lasted too long and it would just be a drag. Hmm I can't really see Snape easily giving out free hugs lol, but yeah maybe they can work towards something along those lines. Especially now that Severus has seen Harry's home life.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! It took me forever to figure out how to deal with the curse and for it to make sense. That moment with Severus and Harry was also one of my favorites as well. In the end, I really wanted Severus to know what Harry's been through and realize that Harry does need someone to be there for him. Now hopefully the next chapters will come along quicker than this one. Thanks for reviewing! :) |
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