Potions and Snitches
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Title: Force of Habit 02 Feb 2022 4:10 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so glad that Snape is handling Clarice and Kieran so well. I hope he can get Harry to open up more. Thanks for the great chapter.
Title: Force of Habit 12 Dec 2016 10:48 pm
Reviewer: AinsleyWright (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story! I love how you wrote the characters. Looking forward to updates.
Title: Force of Habit 07 Nov 2016 7:36 am
Reviewer: UniquelyMe (Signed) [Report This]
    I've never been a fan of Snape being Harry's father plot. This one is good though. I can't wait until your next update :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Next one is coming soon. :)
Title: Force of Habit 23 Oct 2016 1:08 am
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    And the Dursley's 'training' strikes again. At least Harry's starting to think to tell Severus, even if he doesn't yet have the courage to actually go through with it. It's nice to see Harry learning to take solace in potions like his father does. I have no doubt that once Brat manages to wheedle his way into his own lessons, things will... become an accurate reflection of the classroom. On one hand, it will be fair to have -him- in the lab when Harry is finally allowed back onto the broom, but on the other hand, this is their bonding time. It's the time that Severus has with Harry that has to impact or influence from outside sources. Harry better keep a good eye on his broom when he's finally allowed to fly. Or there might be an incident that might require appropriating a new one.
Title: Force of Habit 22 Oct 2016 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter as they are not rushing into a father/son relationship but still hesitant towards each other thank you so much for updating.
Title: Force of Habit 20 Oct 2016 6:28 pm
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love that you keep the angst going. Great job at keeping it realistic too with the relationship between Snape and Kieran. Even if he doesn't like the way he (or his mother) acts he's still his son and he has a certain responsibility.
Title: Force of Habit 20 Oct 2016 6:21 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    No!! He was so close to relying on snape!! :(

    Author's Response: Don't worry, he'll get there one day. :)

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