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Title: The Little Things 12 May 2016 7:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh!! Ahhh!! I did not see that coming! I wonder where Harry went, did a Deatheater get him? Did Draco make him out earlier?! Oh man, I really hope that Harry is safe and still in disguise! I really hope that he can get out of there safely!

    I found it really amusing that Kieran is all the qualities Severus thought Harry was before he got to know Harry for real. The Quidditch book was just the icing on the cake.

    I'm glad that Severus told Clarice off - he didn't like her any way, but they way she seemed to hate Harry with no provocation... I wonder why that is. Is it because Harry is Lily's child and Clarice is jealous of Lily's standing in Snape's heart? Or is she a Death Eater or something?

    Funny that both of Kieran's parents are potions masters. He should be a natural at it then, right?

    I have a feeling that this next year at Hogwarts is going to be an eventful and dramatic one. I kind of hope that Kieran doesn't get into Slytherin. Obviously he won't be getting into Ravenclaw.

    Oh I really hope that Harry is okay so that he makes it to Hogwarts afterall! Thank you so much for the update, fantastic chapter! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! You'll find out soon why Clarice hates Harry. Severus definitely got an eye opener to the personalities of his sons. The next year at Hogwarts is going to be a wild ride. Lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Title: The Little Things 12 May 2016 4:50 am
Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohh! I hate that woman, judging people before knowing about anything.
    Grr, I hope she is punished, but with harry kind nature he will probably forgive her quite quickly.

    Please i want to see what happened next :)

    Author's Response: Haha you're not the only one. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Facing Consequences 10 May 2016 5:54 am
Reviewer: barby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it. Please update soon.
Title: Facing Consequences 27 Apr 2016 9:49 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    One can always hope. :)
Title: Facing Consequences 26 Apr 2016 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very sensitive chapter.
Title: Facing Consequences 26 Apr 2016 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!! Can't believe Snape didn't ask about the owls :). Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! It will come up again next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Facing Consequences 25 Apr 2016 5:23 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry and Kieran get along better soon.

    Author's Response: Yeah that might take a while...
Title: Facing Consequences 25 Apr 2016 3:25 am
Reviewer: mandancie (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good. :D I can't wait to see how the trip to Diagon Alley goes. :D Update as soon as you can. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you! Next one is coming asap. :)
Title: Facing Consequences 24 Apr 2016 6:49 am
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I hope that they're able to come up with some sort of agreement before the new school year begins, or things might get nasty between him and Harry. I'm proud to see that Harry showed such restraint when they were cleaning up the library. Though, I don't think that an eavesdropping spell would have been remiss to catch what the boys were saying. (I would not be surprised in the least if that was one of the 'Standard Teacher's Spells') I foresee this trip to Diagon Alley being a LONG one for all three of them. But, I hope that Severus is able to stick it out without wanting to strangle one or the other boy. One because I see whinging within the first hour, the other constantly trying to become a mouse and put away things that are not 100% a 'need' item... then again, if the boy's not going to be whinging, he's going to be snatching just as much, if not more, than Harry's going to try to put back. To limit one without putting out the other... that'll be 'Fun'!

    Wouldn't it be nice for Harry to see some familiar -friendly- faces in Diagon?

    Author's Response: First let me just say that I love your long reviews. I love reading your opinions and your predictions to what is going to happen. The trip to Diagon Alley is going to be interesting and (hint hint) it's not just going to be the three of them. It would be nice for Harry to see some friendly familiar faces after the summer he's been through so far. We'll just see what happens next! :)
Title: Facing Consequences 23 Apr 2016 1:54 am
Reviewer: ilreies (Signed) [Report This]
    love! just what i needed as a pick-me-up after having fever for the past three days. thanks for updating!

    oh wait so kieran is gonna be a transfer student to Hogwarts? awwwh shucks and i have a sneaky feeling kieran is gonna be up to something during the trip to diagon! hmmmmmm. cant wait for the next!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you're feeling better now and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yup Kieran's coming to Hogwarts. It's going to be interesting to say the least. :)

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