| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 10:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Really love this one. And a great cliffhanger too. Hope the next chapter isn't too long - can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next one is coming soon I promise!
Woah! What a cliffhanger! Great chapter! I am greatly enjoying Kieran as a foil to Harry. I see more issues and problems between the two in the future. I am loving your Snape. Great thoughts in this chapter from both Snape and Harry. It makes sense that Harry would get so upset about his mum. Great story and thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! There's definitely going to be conflict between the two that Snape's going to have to deal with. Thanks for reviewing! :)
What a place to stop! Hope the next chapter comes along quickly. Its a good sign that Snape is giving Harry the chance to tell his side of things, and not taking Kieran's viewpoint as gospel.
Author's Response: Yeah Snape's seeing Harry a little differently now. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Heal him Snape!!!!
Author's Response: Lol he's getting there!
| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 3:07 am
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| Reviewer: 44robot44 (Anonymous)
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i really like this story. i hope you will update this soon. very entertaining:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely will be updating soon! :)
Kieran deserved to be punched in the face.... With a book... Or two..... Anyway, love the story and with the epic ending you put at the end of it, I will definitely be waiting for the update for this
Author's Response: Yeah definitely. Lol. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: On the Edge
| 02 Apr 2016 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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loved how you did the conflict between the two boys and how Snape handled it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Ah! What a cliffie. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is coming soon!
| Title: Shattered Expectations
| 31 Mar 2016 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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How did he know it was Harry? Loved the chapter but found the mix up of tenses a little difficult to read.
Author's Response: Thanks. I edited the chapter so that it was more clear it was Harry who was having the nightmare. What mix up of tenses are you referring to?
| Title: Shattered Expectations
| 29 Mar 2016 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy your story. Please updated soon. The days between the 17 and 26 March were just agony for me ( i was like cheeking every hour to see if there were any new chapter). As you can see i am no t english so story for the mistake. And i dont me an To ne rude. I just want to compliment you for your Work. Your are really good at it.
One more thing if you want your story last longer tried not to make Snape changes his mind about Harry To soon it s more realistic because who can
erase years of hatred in one sommer. And as Snqpe is a very obtuse it s understable that it ont change his mind before a long time maybe.
But it is your story so do what you think would fit the story. I m no one to force you To change your mind.
Forget what i said And keep going you are the best :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yes I agree that it's difficult to get rid of hatred in one summer, but I think the fact that Snape knows Harry is his son, his and Lily's, will get him to change his mind a bit quicker than if they had no relationship other than student and professor.
Thanks for the review! I promise next chapter is coming soon. :)
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