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Reviews For Growing Powerful
I think some back story would be helpful here. Like: Who decided that Harry needed extra training? Is Harry going home to the Dursley home or staying somewhere else while he is training? What does he think of his new schedule? Maybe you have this in the next chapter and I am just getting ahead of things, but I thought I would make the suggestion. I always admire people who have the courage to write a story in a language that isn't their own. You are doing a good job with it. Author's Response: Moody and Snape *have* to get along because Dumbledore told them that Harry must be trained. You know how it goess with Dumbledore, one can't just start arguing with him about something he already decided :D he always has too good reasoning. Harry is staying at Grimmauld Place since his training takes place there. Thank you :) I'm really afraid sometimes that my grammar is incorrect, but I'm trying to correct it.
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