Oh, all the what ifs and misunderstandings. So sad, but really well done, and a nice twist that Snape wasn't looking for Lily right at the end.
You killed me with this. It was so lovely and so unfailingly sad that Snape didn't realise his own feelings until it was too late for Harry to benefit from them. Beautiful job.
Oh wow. That was really powerful. Very enjoyable to read about Severus' realizations. The fawn instead of the doe, the memories reviewed. Beautifully done.
There is one typo you may want to correct: escape. I will post the sentence after it to help you locate it: "Choose to eascape. He hoped the boy would choose to escape."
| Title: Endless Night
| 17 May 2016 9:39 am
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Yes, he should have been Harry's father. Thank you for a poignant one-shot.
My heart skipped a bit when I saw you name, because I am waiting with bated breath for a new chapter of "Ripped".
Wow. That was really well-written and depressing.
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