Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 27 Jun 2016 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh... that woman. Very nice.
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2016 12:07 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so well written. I cannot get enough! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2016 12:07 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so well written. I cannot get enough! :)
Title: Chapter 4 26 Jun 2016 9:58 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like the old adage about the road to hell being paved with good intentions was correct in this case. Madam Pomfrey messed up big time. This can't have done Harry any good. One note, I noticed you wrote 'taught with anger' and used taught earlier in the chapter. The word you want is taut. Pronounced the same way but spelled differently and it means tight or to tighten.

    Author's Response: Rectified. Thanks a lot!
Title: Chapter 3 26 Jun 2016 9:45 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry it sounds like he is floundering. Too bad that Madam Pomfrey didn't stay in the room for a bit. I was surprised that Ginny wasn't around more for Harry. I knew that her family was important but she was supposedly in love with Harry and would have thought he would have been her first priority.
Title: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, you writing style is very impressive. You can feel with Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much *blushing, flattered* I worked hard to lift forward Harry’s sad and depressive mood in chapter 2, perhaps slowing the pace of the story, but necessary none-the-less to give a picture of Harry’s state of mind at this point of the story.

Title: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016 11:09 pm
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo, how exciting! Loving this so far! XD

    Author's Response:

    Wonderful! Hang on to it, and thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016 9:11 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Now I'm really interested in this.

    Author's Response:

    Great if I hooked you! Two chapters of intense Petunia-Harry interaction (and a bit of Snape) coming up next. I hope you’ll enjoy it!

Title: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016 8:50 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Petunia turned up to see Harry? That must be the last thing he ever would have expected. Looking forward to finding out what she has to say.

    Author's Response:

    Check the newly posted chapters and you’ll learn what Petunia has to say to Harry! Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 1 25 Jun 2016 8:43 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was surprising. Looking forward to reading more.

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