Oh wow. I just came across your stories today, and I have to say, I am just DEVOURING them. You write very well, and I am so taken in by Aftermath!Snape - this new, more patient and less bitter version. It is an interesting premise for sure. I love watching him grow more and more attached to Harry, who really could use a stable father figure after all the trauma the end of the war has wrought him. It really is quite evil to leave us hanging where you did, you know ;P I can't wait to see what peril Snape will have to save Harry from now, and too, I am eager to see Harry finally interacting with Dumbledore. I have always loved the relationship these three men inadvertently share, and I feel like this story is ripe with possibility. You are doing an awesome job. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Better late than never, I guess… because here is the update. Thanks for your review. I’m particularly glad that you picked up the potential in the story regarding the relationship between Dumbledore, Harry and Snape. I hope to be able to elaborate on that in the coming chapter(s). / Henna
| Title: Chapter 4
| 29 Aug 2016 7:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter thank you
Dear Henna,
I had to write and tell you, I have greatly enjoyed reading your stories. Your characters possess such depth, and your scenes are intriguing and rich with detail. (I also worked in healthcare -in Mental Health - so I particularly enjoy that aspect in fiction when well written.) That you can write so beautifully in a second language is just amazing to me...in fact, most of your writing is far more precise than the work of many fiction writers for whom English is their native tongue! In truth, you hardly need any assistance: but it's a fact that every writer benefits from having their work proofread by someone with an outside perspective. Sometimes we become too close to our own work to effectively proof it ourselves. (I wouldn't dream of publishing anything without first having it proofread by my talented and endlessly patient editor, Kay!) If you are still seeking a Beta for your stories, I would consider it a privilege to assist you. I retired last year to care for my husband, who is partially disabled, so I have time on my hands and no pressing schedules to keep. (I may even FINALLY have time this year to finish one of my own, badly neglected stories!) I have some editing experience, and most of the time it would be no trouble to beta a chapter and return it to you fairly quickly. If you are interested, please feel free to contact me. You can find me listed on this site as Twinheart. Best of luck to you, and keep up the good work. I am so looking forward to your next chapter! Cheers! Twinheart
Author's Response: Thank you, Twinheart, for the encouragement and for the offer to beta! I'm definitely interested and I sent you a message from your P&S page - did you get it? I also wish YOU all the luck, courage and tenacity to finish your stories. Yours, Henna.
The plot thickens - where is Harry?
Author's Response: :-) Indeed, it does.
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