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Title: Chapter 8: Room of Requirement 17 Jan 2017 9:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter Harry is so forgiving!
Title: Chapter 9: Last Night 14 Jan 2017 6:25 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Hawaii heard you.
Title: Chapter 7: Snape's quarters. 12 Jan 2017 10:02 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the vivid description of the colourful rooms and Harry's solid healing instincts - hm, he has had to be his own doctor for some years. -
    although the books do not give much chance of the bloody scenes in a fascist house, that many teen writers like to indulge in - Gothic horror.
    I admit, their hard hearts and negative names for him, bars on windows, and that they let Dudley bully him mercilessly is horrible enough.
    (My next review at chap.9 should have been placed after the eighth chapter.)
    Reading on with interest.
Title: Chapter 9: Last Night 12 Jan 2017 8:32 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    It is a lovely story, which I enjoy.
    What happened to the Chapter 8,called the Room of Requirement?
    It is gone. No text at all, just an
    author note, which is pleasant to read, and encouraging for faithful readers. then it suddenly starts again with chapter 9, in which Harry and his two friends are in the middle of a long conversation somewhere.
    Perhaps it has been deleted?
    Ah, well, things happen.
    I like the story for the believable vulnerability of the cat and the man which has pain and high fever, ... maybe try to make a bridge, so that you show how Severus is swinging between his new, unlocked,warmer, tender side learning to trust Harry, and his usual, distant, cool, outer persona, which he has had on as a mask for many years. That wouldn't just disappear completely over a week of new experiences and new ideas about the mistreated boy. In other words , be careful you don't change your actor's roles so fast, that it is unrealistic. Describe changes more slowly.
    You describe the instinctive actions of the wounded cat very well and sensitively.
    Ps. Ron is more than just a loud, vocal dunce, he is also loyal to his friends, stubborn, has a upbeat sense of humor, protective of his new 'brother' Harry, acts before he thinks, then regrets it, he has a sense of realism, that Hermione lacks.
    He is intelligent at strategy and long term winning = very good at chess.
    So many paint him as an shouting idiot, and he isn't. He is just a normal, talented kid, having two extraordinary friends; not always easy to be out-shone.
    Looking forward to read more, with great pleasure, as I adore Severus Snape and the Cat.

    Author's Response: I'm sorry about chapter 8, I'll upload it again. Thank you for telling me and for your advices!!
Title: Chapter 9: Last Night 09 Jan 2017 2:19 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful Sev. Screaming doesn't suit you.
Title: Chapter 9: Last Night 08 Jan 2017 3:51 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love grumpy, needs a hug snape paired with mature, concerned Harry.... It's an adorable duo
Title: Chapter 7: Snape's quarters. 25 Nov 2016 3:16 am
Reviewer: Slytherin_Serpent (Signed) [Report This]
    great keep it up
Title: Chapter 7: Snape's quarters. 11 Oct 2016 3:10 am
Reviewer: hule (Signed) [Report This]
    May the results of your exams be as good as your story is. Thanks for updating.
Title: Chapter 7: Snape's quarters. 09 Oct 2016 5:19 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I look forward to reading more when you get the chance to post!
Title: Chapter 7: Snape's quarters. 06 Oct 2016 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the story so far, good luck with your exams and I'm looking forward to the next instalment when you can

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