Reviews For Fairytale Of Home
One of favorite things on this chapter was Harry's reaction to Lupin as an teacher of dubious character. That just made me smile. Even after this chapter I still have a bit of an inkling that Lupin could be up to something, but I may be reading too much into it.
I am so curious to see what will happen with Aofie, the painting and all of that.
It feels like Snape is starting to express his care towards Harry differently and I wished we would have seen more of a gradual development there rather than out of the blue. I think Snape has always cared for Harry in his own way and has a hard time expressing his emotions, but the outward change seemed a bit abrupt. As far as the plot too I feel like all that tension and build up got a little deflated in the last chapters. These are only minor things though and I absolutely love your story. Thanks for sharing your time and talent!
Not so in your story. Harry has a lot of grievances and anger towards Snape. He did so much wrong towards harry on purpose. He was and is cruel and malicious. He took his time and thought about the best ways to hurt an innocent just to get back at a dead man. His chicken's are coming home to roost. I really hope we see some repentance and atonement from Snape. Not just a ceasing of his vitriol, but actual actions towards fixing what he broke.
As a reader, I just can't summon up even a smidge of sympathy for Snape at this time. I have much contempt for him and am very interested to see if he can be redeemed. Can't wait to see where you take this character and story.
I'm still insanely curious as to the results of the investigation. Will we get some details?
As always, I love this story. It's one of my favorites.
I offer my best wishes to you and your recovery. Being ill sucks balls when it goes on longer than a few days. Hang in there!
Author's Response: I've got half the chapter but it has been a slow process as I am still struggling with my health, I plan to have it up within the next two weeks and since I am getting a new treatment starting March I hope to recover in Spring and be able to write more :) I've missed being able to so much!
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