I do hope you finish this story soon! It is very well written and I am quite taken in. I am dying to know Severus' ultimate fate.
| Title: In which the final grievances are aired
| 22 Jul 2017 6:26 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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This is SO good. Would Sirius' forgiveness have counted for more if it wasn't just for Harry? Lets hope the Judge agrees with Lily that Snape has the potential to do much good.
| Title: In which the final grievances are aired
| 20 Jul 2017 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thought Sirius and Lily were IC with what they said thank you so much for updating your excellent story
So glad to get another chapter of this story. It's a favorite of mine. I thought Lily was rather hard on Snape. Though, I imagine, she wanted him to move on from his obsession with her. I was glad that Sirius apologized, at least. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: She does want him to move on, but for his own sake not because she is in any way upset by the fact that she was the impetus for his return to the Light or that he has done good things in her memory. She was hard on him because she knows he can do better.
| Title: In which a struggle ensues
| 14 Jan 2017 8:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good blend of cannon and your plot thank you
*Sighs in relief* they're okay.
*Sighs in relief* they're okay.
| Title: In which a struggle ensues
| 10 Jan 2017 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
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I had a feeling it was going to be Tom and you played that out quite originally. Great job! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one for sure.
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