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Reviews For It's Better In the Dark

Title: Chapter 2: Piecing It All Back Together	26 Jun 2020 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Signed)	[Report This]

Very interesting and emotional.

Title: Chapter 2: Piecing It All Back Together	04 May 2017 6:25 am
Reviewer: kncrowder88 (Signed)	[Report This]

I really love how you are showing Dudley's change. It's not to sudden and we can tell he struggled. You have a lot of errors in this that could be fixed with a quick edit. I would also suggest not adding A/N in the middle of chapters, if you already have warnings on the fic there is no need to give one half way through as well. Enjoying the change in Snape and his acknowledgement of things. Great job!

Title: Chapter 2: Piecing It All Back Together	26 Apr 2017 8:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)	[Report This]

Very angsty thank you

Title: Chapter 1	26 Apr 2017 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)	[Report This]

Very good story thank you.

Title: Chapter 2: Piecing It All Back Together	24 Apr 2017 8:00 am
Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next

Title: Chapter 1	30 Dec 2016 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)	[Report This]

Thank you a very good story

Title: Chapter 1	29 Dec 2016 12:20 am
Reviewer: maukgu (Signed)	[Report This]

I'm liking this so far. I like how Dudley is helping Harry a bit without having a complete personality transplant.

Title: Chapter 1	27 Dec 2016 9:16 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)	[Report This]

I like your Dudley. He usually is just written as a stupid bully so it's refreshing to have a more mature, compassionate version here. He was proving to be an interesting referee between his parents and Harry. I wonder if he will have the same role between Harry and Snape?

Title: Chapter 1	27 Dec 2016 11:16 am
Reviewer: harryjames (Signed)	[Report This]

Brilliant! Looking forward to more!