cool- that he receive praise from severus!!
love the first chapie: can't wait to see what next!!
| Title: Summer 1997
| 09 Aug 2017 9:50 pm
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Thank you a very concise chapter
| Title: Spring 1997
| 01 Aug 2017 9:51 pm
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Winter 1996
| 27 Jul 2017 9:49 pm
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Interesting blend of your story and cannon but perhaps a little too much cannon in this chapter
Author's Response: I will try and make sure that doesn't happen again in the future. Thanks for commenting.
Lovely chapter! I missed a little more Snape interaction at the end. I would have loved for Snape to fix his nose or something like that.
Author's Response: Ah well, Severus can't fix everything, even if he and Harry would prefer it that way. It's nice to see you comments.
Great idea to send Harry home with Neville. Great chapter!
Another great job on this chapter! I can't wait to see how the confrontation in the bathroom with Malfoy goes. It's getting so close to the end!!
Author's Response: Thank you. The confrontation with Malfoy in the bathroom is getting closer and closer... or is it. You'll have to wait and see.
Absolutely loved this chapter. It was one of my favorites that you have written. The "Professor Snape said so"s from Harry was so cute. I love that he still listens to and respects Severus.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much, it was a fun one to write. Harry respects and trusts Severus greatly, he just doesn't always listen.
| Title: Fall 1996
| 18 Jul 2017 8:38 pm
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Very good take on 6th year, I love Luna!
Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad you like Luna.
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