You’ve captured what Blaise and Harry are each thinking and feeling exceptionally well. Thanks so much. I could feel their turmoil.
Poor Blaise. Your excellent writing makes it easy to sympathise with him (and the other characters).
He has no idea what he’s getting into accepting the adoption.
I hope Harry can help him, considering he has had a somewhat similar experience.
Anyway, thank you for this great chapter. I really enjoyed it.
| Title: Adopted
| 08 Mar 2017 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good although I was getting a bit frustrated with lack of Harry but more than made up with the last scene. Thank you so much for updating
I can't wait to read the next chapter. :0)
loved this chapter!!! great character development. loved harry & blaise's conversation-- you created such a wonderful balance between the tension and fear of the situation and the fact that, y'know, they're only 11. wonderful chapter!!
Thank-you for this next chapter in your story. If your plan is to have a new chapter once a week then I will be watching this site regularly.
Poor Blaise. He keeps thinking Mrs Weasley doesn't like him. He doesn't realize that that she isn't unhappy with him but unhappy for him. I hope that during the Easter Break to come, the Weasley can start to get Blaise to feel less emotionally empty. Blaise's thoughts that he could never be a "Weasley kid" who runs around, makes friends, does stupid shit and gets into trouble is so telling. Those things are that kids do who know that they have parents who will always love them. How sad that Blaise doesn't feel like he can be a normal child.
As part of this story, I glad we get to see more of Harry and Snape's evolving relationship. Harry also needs to know that Snape will be there for him always even if he doesn't like the consequences of having a Dad to answer to for poor choices.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Blaise's thinking pattern is so painfully true to life. Looking forward to more.
excellent!! love the angst I also enjoy seeing both Blaise's and Harry's emotions and fears. You've written this very well.
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