I love this story so much! It’s one of my absolute favorites. Thanks so much.
| Title: Little Brother
| 26 Apr 2018 9:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it thank you. Poor Blaize such a lost boy
| Title: Little Brother
| 18 Mar 2018 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Lola (Signed)
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I love this story. It is one of my favourites of all time. I noticed you hadn't updated in a while. I hope you are well and know that there are still people out here interested in reading your fic :)
Aww poor everyone!!! Can't wait for more!
Blaise has certainly gotten himself in some deep trouble now. Molly is worried sick and Arthur and the rest of the family aren’t far behind.
Blaise has never been truly want by anyone in the past so how can he understand that the Weasleys want him to be a part of their family now and forever.
The next chapter should be very interesting for alll.
Please post soon.
GAAAH! Just came home from my honeymoon and saw an email that you had updated and was so excited. But as usual, I'm a greedy little thing and I've read it and just want moreeee. But also. Great chapter. And I love it. And I love that we saw a little more of Arthur towards the end, also
I love seeing the way Blaise is struggling; both he and the Weasleys wanting him to be a part of the family, but him refusing to risk it. And that moment when he realised his goal keeps swinging between having them accept him, and forcing them to kick him out...
Poor Blaise at the end, there. He's tired and hungry and confused and scared, and to top it all off Molly just won't give up and let him sneak in to retrieve his stuff.
We've already seen him pushed far enough to make him run, what happens when he gives in completely?
(note: the correct answer is hugs - and probably tears - including him hugging back)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter as soon as it's ready. Please don't leave him waiting outside too long.
To be continued... how I hate this message
Poor Blaise, he's as mixed up as Harry
We'd like more soon. Pretty please?
One suggestion; it would be good to mark different character's POV more distinctly. Maybe it's just me,but it took me a sec to realize that Arthur was the one talking about his boss. At first I thought Snape joined in.
I hope they find him soon.
I liked that line, "Still not lost--or no more lost than he was at home, at any rate." Really good chapter and really good fic.
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