I agree. No parent should bury their child.
Harry is so dang cute and adorable!!!!
Author's Response: He can't help it!
| Title: Ages 2-4
| 06 May 2017 1:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it Harry is so cute and the men so sweet thank you
Author's Response: Thank you.
Swatted for building a snowman - that would seem most unfair, indeed! Nice update. It's good to see how their interpersonal relations are coming together.
Author's Response: I know, right? Sometimes we, as adults, don't really get how kids see the world (and they don't get us either).
You might check the word wrap in either your browser or whatever word-pad you use to write in. P&S has a bad habit of making large spaces in certain chapters, and then deleting needed paragraph spaces in others. Also, this is an adorable story, and I'd love you to continue it ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. It still seems to be an issue. I copied it all from once place, but it the paragraphs were treated differently in different parts this time. I'll continue because it's mostly finished. I took a long time on this update because I had a dreadful kidney stone and work is CRAZY this time of year.
Aww. I liked how Harry wanted to share his gifts. Though, just like Severus, I wondered how the Slytherin students would feel about toddler toys.
Author's Response: It gets mentioned later!
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