That was an interesting first chapter. I hadn't read your original story so I wasn't familiar with the theme. That is one I haven't seen before. It's nice to see Petunia so loving towards Harry. Unfortunately, Dudley is still Dudley. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: This is quite substantially re-worked from the previous version, so no worries if you weren't familiar with it. Actually probably better this way. Writing the Dursleys this way has been quite interesting for me. I'm glad you're looking forward to more - thanks for the review!