Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 30 Nov 2022 7:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the image of a powerful Harry with a white aura, and Snape’s response was pitch perfect.
Title: Chapter 2 05 Jun 2017 4:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done thank you
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 7:12 pm
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed both these chapters and look forward to more. Great job!
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 12:44 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! I imagine Harry is just as emotionally confused as I am. Quite the roller coaster.

    First...LOL at the idea that Harry doesn't know the counter to the sticking charm. He can leave whenever he wants really.

    Second: Detention with Snape after this doesn't sound good. Snape is Snape. He's cruel and can't really help but provoking responses and then beating a person down for it. Sort of like he sets harry up for failure and then condemns him for it. How is Harry going to get all his homework done if he has detention for a month? I can't imagine this is the only punishment harry will receive for this justified explosion.

    Third: I'm actually happy Harry sort of snapped and pushed back against one of his many abusers. About time. It also has the happy yet scary side affect of exposing the abuse. Happy because he'll get treatment but scary since it's very possible it's already known and/or nothing will be done about it. Also scary that Snape now knows all of Harry's vulnerabilities and will most likely use them against Harry (at least from Harry's experience of Snape thus far).

    Should be interesting.
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 12:33 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Snape did tell Potter to "Prove it." He might want to think over that particular order in the future....

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

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