Using Hermione and Ron to help convince Harry to come back was a good idea. I wonder why Harry can't see?
It's great to see the castle through the eyes of Muggles! :-)
I love this new development as everyone flocks to support Harry! The part with at the end with the counselors was really interesting :)
Another brilliant cliffhanger, with a great buildup to leave the reader properly waiting, eagerly for more. Lovely work. I like that Ron is the one who gives Harry the layout of the room, because it seems like something he would catch onto with his ability to think several steps ahead, and strategize in chess and other activities. I look forward to reading more.
| Title: Chapter 23
| 26 Aug 2017 7:32 pm
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Very interesting poor Sevetus his life is not his own!
Love this turn of events, with Harry moving in with Severus and Covey. Hopefully he will begin to heal mentally and emotionally now that he is physically healed. I shudder to think of what could possibly have happened that he'd subconsciously choose blindness over remembering. Excellent chapter.
| Title: Chapter 22
| 21 Aug 2017 9:25 pm
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Crisis after crisis what more can poor Harry go through. Very touching scene with Ron and Hermione.
| Title: Chapter 21
| 21 Aug 2017 8:26 pm
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Loved Ron and the comma only bit that was light so a relief. Great chapter very well done
Exciting chapter. I am glad that Ron and Hermione were instrumental in helping find and then lure Harry out, and hope that the blindness can be reversed. I look forward to reading more.
Two steps forward one step backwards.
I love you story
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