Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 05 Jun 2017 4:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done thank you
Title: Chapter 1 05 Jun 2017 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic opening chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2017 2:29 pm
Reviewer: RonnieLepkowitz (Signed) [Report This]
    Eeee! I'm loving this story. It's frightfully sad in ways, which is understandable given the reality of the Dursley household. But I'm happy to see some action being taken! And that Albus is good (so many fics write him to turn a blind eye to Harry ;-;). Oh, and I especially like how this all started! It's a very believable concept that Harry's anger and emotions would get the best of him to show such memories to Snape to simply shut the man up with the truth. I do so enjoy your writing and I look forward to more.^_^
Title: Chapter 3 01 Jun 2017 9:27 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    On the one hand, I'm gratified that DD didn't know. On the other hand, he is undoubtedly negligent in his self appointed responsibility "to keep harry safe". He totally dropped the ball which means he is unable to actually keep harry safe, leading me to believe that he shouldn't have this responsibility anymore. Harry is old enough to make his own decisions once he's given all the facts. That he is still making decisions for Harry without his input and without disclosing all the information is insulting and shows that he does't actually care, no matter how horrified he is.

    His waffling on Umbridge and protection of Petunia (a fucking child abuser) for the sake of the status quo and his personal plans, rather than justice and harry's safety leave quite the bitter taste in my mouth.

    DD isn't off the hook in my opinion. Nor is he capable of choosing Harry's protector at the Dursley's. I honestly don't think DD see's harry as a person; just a tool.

    Love (read: hate) how Severus conveniently didn't show his own abuse of Harry and will come off as the Hero in DD's eyes. And when harry disputes this, DD will admonish him, leaving Harry feeling unheard and his justified complaints dismissed as unimportant. That the abuser is once again getting away with it, with DD's knowledge and consent. Just like Petunia and Umbridge will.

    I seriously hope Harry doesn't just forgive and accept him. IRL, Snape would have some serious confession and atonement to do before any sort of halfway positive relationship could be formed. Forget about trust. IRL, that wouldn't happen for a very long time and only after a lot of work on Snape's part. I honestly don't think this Snape would be capable or even willing to do it.

    Does Snape even really care that abused Harry? Or is it just a momentary feeling of shame that he was wrong and was forced to admit that?

    Am I being too critical of Snape?

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 7:12 pm
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed both these chapters and look forward to more. Great job!
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 12:44 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! I imagine Harry is just as emotionally confused as I am. Quite the roller coaster.

    First...LOL at the idea that Harry doesn't know the counter to the sticking charm. He can leave whenever he wants really.

    Second: Detention with Snape after this doesn't sound good. Snape is Snape. He's cruel and can't really help but provoking responses and then beating a person down for it. Sort of like he sets harry up for failure and then condemns him for it. How is Harry going to get all his homework done if he has detention for a month? I can't imagine this is the only punishment harry will receive for this justified explosion.

    Third: I'm actually happy Harry sort of snapped and pushed back against one of his many abusers. About time. It also has the happy yet scary side affect of exposing the abuse. Happy because he'll get treatment but scary since it's very possible it's already known and/or nothing will be done about it. Also scary that Snape now knows all of Harry's vulnerabilities and will most likely use them against Harry (at least from Harry's experience of Snape thus far).

    Should be interesting.
Title: Chapter 2 29 May 2017 12:33 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Snape did tell Potter to "Prove it." He might want to think over that particular order in the future....

    Can't wait to see what happens next!
Title: Chapter 1 28 May 2017 3:13 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    You asked for it Snape. I hope Molly gets a hold of you before anybody else gets you.
Title: Chapter 1 28 May 2017 7:07 am
Reviewer: Aixxx (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter chrasima! I just love stories with a mean Snape, thinking himself so observant when Harry is right under his nose. Update quickly please.
    ;)
Title: Chapter 1 27 May 2017 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Hopeless_SilverFox (Signed) [Report This]
    This is amazing, i really can't wait for the next chapter!

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