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Reviews For MINDSCAPE - The Healing Journey
Though, at least in the end they made up. As far as I know, with a few teeth knocked out you can still speak perfectly. My front two milk teeth had fallen together when I was around 8 or 9 and I could speak perfectly clearly. Whatever, I like this chapter, at least it doesn't end in a cliffhanger but to be honest, I like the story Lily's Lost Boys better.
Thanks for taking me out of the depression I had found myself in after reading 13 Reasons Why. Quite depressing, but when I saw the notification of an update, I smiled, so, waiting for the new chapter! Love it so far!
Snape is acting like Harry did with Cho, or even worse, he doesn't know what to do or how Harry is feeling. You said that Snape is going to talk with Harry, I am looking forward to that talk. Ooooh, Harry is going to be one handsome lad, isn't he? Tall, green eyes, jet black hairs, now there aren't even glasses obscuring his beautiful jade eyes. For a moment I had completely forgotten that they were in Harry's fifth year and Voldemort was still trying to get Harry to get the prophecy. I see that there is no Umbridge yet. What about the blood quill? Have you mentioned it? I guess I would have to reread the story? I don't suppose Umbridge is going to keep quite. Lets see what happens next. Can you give me a small pattern in your posting? I am tired of checking my email or this story every single day. Author's Response: I typically post chapters around every 3-4 days. But you can follow me, or this story, and then you will get an email when I post so you don't have to keep checking manually.
Even I have enough tact to know what Harry really wanted. Snape is jus pretty messed up, though not more than Vernon or Petunia........ Any way, it was a good chapter, I, for a fact know, if it was Covey instead of Severus, she would have known that Harry wanted to be proved wrong that Snape didn't care, ah well, as I said, Snape is pretty messed up. By the way, may I ask, how many chapters does this story contain? Author's Response: Probably around 40 chapters. It is all written, but I wrote it as one big file. So I still need to break it into chapters. I have started a sequel but I have other stories started too that I want to post once this one is completely up. |
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