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Title: Chapter 33 10 Oct 2017 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter I love Harry's attempt to put things right!
Title: Chapter 32 10 Oct 2017 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, typical Severus to jump to this conclusion. Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 33 09 Oct 2017 10:15 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, one of the first thing that came into my mind after reading halfway through it was, everything goes wrong with Harry.
    Though, at least in the end they made up.
    As far as I know, with a few teeth knocked out you can still speak perfectly. My front two milk teeth had fallen together when I was around 8 or 9 and I could speak perfectly clearly.
    Whatever, I like this chapter, at least it doesn't end in a cliffhanger but to be honest, I like the story Lily's Lost Boys better.
Title: Chapter 32 08 Oct 2017 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Biggi15 (Signed) [Report This]
    thanks for sharing, hopefully Snape will see soon what really happened
Title: Chapter 32 04 Oct 2017 10:08 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, it had to happen, didn't it? Snape is quite obtuse when in a rage, though I like this version better, actually I love it. Lets see how Snape feels if he really does find out himself that Harry had had an accident. (Keyword being himself.)
    Thanks for taking me out of the depression I had found myself in after reading 13 Reasons Why. Quite depressing, but when I saw the notification of an update, I smiled, so, waiting for the new chapter! Love it so far!
Title: Chapter 31 02 Oct 2017 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Should be a positive chapter but you have skilfully brought all Harry's and Severus' insecurities into it, thank you so much
Title: Chapter 31 29 Sep 2017 5:45 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh well, though the chapter didn't end in a cliffhanger, it left me unsatisfied but I can't blame you, of course, as this was even larger than the last one.
    Snape is acting like Harry did with Cho, or even worse, he doesn't know what to do or how Harry is feeling. You said that Snape is going to talk with Harry, I am looking forward to that talk.
    Ooooh, Harry is going to be one handsome lad, isn't he? Tall, green eyes, jet black hairs, now there aren't even glasses obscuring his beautiful jade eyes.
    For a moment I had completely forgotten that they were in Harry's fifth year and Voldemort was still trying to get Harry to get the prophecy. I see that there is no Umbridge yet. What about the blood quill? Have you mentioned it? I guess I would have to reread the story?
    I don't suppose Umbridge is going to keep quite.
    Lets see what happens next.
    Can you give me a small pattern in your posting? I am tired of checking my email or this story every single day.

    Author's Response: I typically post chapters around every 3-4 days. But you can follow me, or this story, and then you will get an email when I post so you don't have to keep checking manually.
Title: Chapter 31 29 Sep 2017 2:39 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Can't wait to see snape and Harry's unresolved stuff play out :)
Title: Chapter 30 28 Sep 2017 7:52 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lump in the throat time! Poor Harry, why can't Severus see what he needs! Thank you for a tear jerking brilliant chapter
Title: Chapter 30 23 Sep 2017 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know what, or why but as the new chapters are posted they start to get better, so I don't think that there is a need to say that that this one is my favourite so far. This one sent strange tingling sensations through my heart and stomach.
    Even I have enough tact to know what Harry really wanted. Snape is jus pretty messed up, though not more than Vernon or Petunia........
    Any way, it was a good chapter, I, for a fact know, if it was Covey instead of Severus, she would have known that Harry wanted to be proved wrong that Snape didn't care, ah well, as I said, Snape is pretty messed up.
    By the way, may I ask, how many chapters does this story contain?

    Author's Response: Probably around 40 chapters. It is all written, but I wrote it as one big file. So I still need to break it into chapters. I have started a sequel but I have other stories started too that I want to post once this one is completely up.

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