Darn. You made me cry. Good stuff.
This was wonderful! I hope this means you have more coming for your other stories too!
Title: Young Again
| 25 Jun 2017 10:20 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great original story
I really enjoyed reading this. It wasn't drawn out, and hit on the important parts. I liked the theme of Harry and Severus being the same, and how you used Pollyjuice (even for the 30 seconds) to help emphasize that point. Thank you also for the notes at the end, to show the readers what the future would be like. It is nice to use our imagination, yes, but it also nice to know where the author would like the story to go as well.
Gryffindores don't know the meaning of loyalty.
I really enjoyed your story. The changes in Snape after he re-ages are well done. I like how he only lets Harry know he remembers anything from being de-aged. Very Slytherin! Glad to see you're back writing on P&S.
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