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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2023 12:55 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the singing, and the acknowledgment that there are gaping flaws to the current plan. I hope that Snape can come up with some solutions.
Title: Chapter 10 10 Oct 2017 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an almost healing chapter
Title: Chapter 10 01 Oct 2017 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    The sight to see singing is a sight to behold. Somehow, his singing reminded me of a verse from a poem. (Not compatible I know, but it reminded me so:)

    Behold her, single in the field,
    Yon solitary Highland Lass!
    Reaping and singing by herself;
    Stop here, or gently pass!

    Yeah, I know nothing to do with the story but I am mad.
    Ola! I was so happy to see the notification on my email that you have updated that I literally pushed my brother off the computer to read it.
    Poor Harry. (I like a poor and suffering Harry)
    Finally, took Snape long enough to find out that Harry is not like James.
    Any idea ow long this story is? I want it to go on forever! But alas, every story has to stop somewhere. (Stories don't end, ever.)
    This again reminded me of another verse. (Poem)

    There is no such thing as a happy ending
    Endings are the saddest part
    So just give me a happy middle
    and a very happy start.

    I am feeling quite poetic today.
    I don't like a happy middle, so I guess all the stories should be sad..................
    Whatever, I liked this chapter. Sorry I didn't love it as nothing actually happened, it was just a kind of filler, but nonetheless, I liked it. Is there going to be more action? I guess you should just put up recovery an healing in this story and the vanquishing of the Dark Lord should be left for the next story in the series.
    Though that is your wish, you story. I love it the way it is!

    Author's Response: Is there going to be more action? Hmm... I'm not sure how to answer that. The recovery and the healing IS the action in this story. I have the ending written. I don't have the middle section complete. 

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